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<h1><span style="font-size: 13px; font-weight: normal; line-height: 19px;"><span style="color: #548dd4; display: block; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 18px; text-align: center;"><img src="/file/view/wave.jpg/142979767/wave.jpg" alt="" title="" /> My Writing Adventure</span> <span style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 18px;"> My writing has been moving up smoothly like the waves at the beach. It’s like how my experience of writing rises and then falls down, waiting for improvement to come. The waves rise up again. When there is something I have a weakness on writing I never give up. When I strengthen that weakness it rises up higher and higher each time. That’s the time when it’s amazing and it’s like wow, what a big improvement of “waves”. My composing has change from the beginning of the year. In the past I use to skip all the steps and start on the final draft. Now I make sure I think for at least 5 to 10 minutes before I start on the subject on the paper. Most of the time chewing gum helps. Then I would make my own trusty web. That helps me come up with many ideas to use on my paper for good details. The web also helps you write more then your intensions to as you’re doing the rough draft. More and more stuff pops up in your head that helps you add on to your information. When that’s all set I’m ready to write my rough draft. When doing my rough draft I look back from each paragraph to make sure I didn’t leave any facts or details in my writing. The rough draft is finish, so I check it out to see if I made any mistakes. Then I do my final draft and it’s completed. My writing expression has grown from the past. It became better, because I now use more persuasive language and make more accurate information in my writing. The tone in my writing has improved because I chose clever words in my sentence. I make my sentences not sound so simple, but more complex When I’m writing I can also hear my voice tone, so that’s how I know my expressions are heard. My writing tones has been, joyful, depression, and sometimes funny. The usage and mechanic parts of my writing, to me it has rising. The sentences I make now sounds and look much clearer, as I read back at my writing. The usage of periods, question marks, commas, and parentheses are in the right spot most of the time. If I don’t know how to spell a word, I use the dictionary and the internet. Everybody makes mistakes this is why we learn from them and edit the paper. The most important thing is you know what they are and know how to use them. <img src="/file/view/Rising-Waves-off-S%27mir-Bay.jpg/142980131/510x510/Rising-Waves-off-S%27mir-Bay.jpg" alt="" title="" style="height: 510px; width: 510px;" /> </span></span></h1>